Writing a Personal Narrative for Kids - Episode 6: Revising
4 min1st2nd3rdReading & Writing (ELA)
Summary
Revising means making writing better, not just fixing mistakes. Kids learn to reread their narrative and add, take out, or change words so the story is clearer and stronger.
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Teaching resources
Discussion questions
Revising is re-seeing your story and making it better.
- What is the difference between revising and editing?
- What can you add or take out to make your story clearer?
- Which part of your story is your favorite, and why?
Quick work-a-long
Words to know: revise, add, take out
- Find one sentence to make stronger and rewrite it.
- Cross out one part that isn't needed.